HSBC advert

My advert is about Manchester United and Manchester City that are fighting for the league to see who is the best. Someone home will be someone enemy and every one has a home club.
i could improve it by having my own slogan

TV news question

1) What were the five stories your group chose to broadcast?
1.Greenford news story: Greenford high receive 2 awards from specialist school and academie trust
2.National news story: Africa Battles To Stop Deadly Spread Of Ebola
3.Sports news story: Suarez will go to a different team from £70 million to £80 million  

4.Funny news story: Suarez biting Chiaillini 

2) For each story above, explain WHY you chose that particular story and not something else. Why would it interest a Greenford audience? 
1. Green ford news story: We chose this story because I chose this because it was a very big moment for our school
2.National news story: We chose this story because it was a big thing and it was a big issue that can kill people.
3.Sports news story: We chose this story because Suarez said he didn't  do it but he did.
4.Funny news story: We chose this story because it is not normal for a person to do.

3) I chosen my order because i decided the most important to the school to what is important to the world next.  I decided to finish the speech on a good and funny moment.

4) I knew the script was the right length because i time the speech before recording and got a average time that was not to long or to short.

5) I made it easy for for people to understand by using word normal people will understand and used different simple word instead of hard word.

6) I made sure that it was professional by making the writer sitting next to a computer and a desk. Also made the reader have good voice and  was sitting down comfortable so he was more relax.

7) I was the director so I wrote the script.

8) 4 out of 5

9) We could have finished finding the news quicker.

10) If i did this again i would have saved the script.